Its so hard to recall my first tip to Taco Bell, I must have been 5 or 6 at the time. I remember the trees in the windows as we drove past out street. I quickly asked my mom where we were going, and why we drove past our street. She told me to hold on and I would see. I simply just remember the lady voice crisp and clear threw the loud speaker reciting back our food.
Over the next few years, I began to go more and more always trying different things and going to different locations. For the most part the service was good; on occasion we would get the wrong food item off our reseat. Like last night my dad and I got the wrong sodas, we ordered two Pepsi’s and got diet instead. So in near future if you are planning to go to your local Taco Bell, be sure to check you food and be sure they gave you what you ordered. Also when they are waiting for your food to be fully coked they make you pull over and wait for it to be done. This doesn’t sit well for most because when you are going to a “fast” food restraint you would hope for it to be fast. Other than that, for the most part I would give them a 3 1/2 out of 5 stars on their service aspect.
After tasting my first bit of the Taco Bell’s cheese quesadilla, I knew this would be a regular for me. Often times I would try something new off the menu. My favorite would have to be the newer 5-layer burrito. It has beans, meat, sour cream, and the two different kinds of cheese. Never once have I received a cold burrito for Taco Bell. I hope to keep it this way. For the most part I have had good experiences with their food. Now I am not saying they have the best food quality but it taste good and if you are going to a fast food restraint, I would hope that is all that you are looking for in your food. They don’t have the best food if you are trying to watch your weight either. If you are going to compare though Taco Bell is much healthier choice than McDonalds. They offer a verity of “healthy” choices if needed. If I had to decide, I would give the food a 4 out of 5.
One thing no one can beat them at is their food cost. They have the cheapest food. You can get my favorite, a 5-layer burrito for only $1+ tax. If your asking me, that is a pretty good deal. This is just one example of the great deals they have at Taco Bell. They defiantly get a 5 out of 5 for food costs.
Over all Taco Bell is one of the few good fast food places still around. So if you have a craving for a hearty cheep meal you can find a Taco Bell on almost every corner.
wow! that was a lot to write about taco bell. i think that there was a lot to take out, almost too much story, maybe focus more on one meal, and less on the whole back round story.
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Overall, i really enjoyed it, made me hungry!
I agree with Kelss. There is a lot of back story to this. In the first paragraph I suggest you replace one "street" because it's awkward.
ReplyDeleteFocus on the food, so we can really taste what you are tasting.
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Great job, this was a great piece! one thing you could still work on is showing and not telling. For example when you say whats in the burrito you should SHOW the reader instead.
ReplyDeleteOne thing I think you could do is explain a little more about how the 5-layer burrito and how it tasted.I thought you had good transitions and i liked how you rated each different category at the end of the paragraphs.
ReplyDeleteGreat piece! All i would say to improve, would be to put more detail into the food to make it pop! (:
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